sleeping in the madhouse...

you are on the top of my wishlist
down in my head
i just wanna cry
or should i glad?

so would you mind?
if i just sneak into your dream?
i know this is gonna make you scream.
but Im not gonna care,
like i never did,
Im gonna walk, bare.
your gonna feel abused.
like i always did.

you show the shine
i crossed the line
Im not yours
but sure you are mine
i don't care if you got hits or break
even if you die
i will scratch you so
just so you know
baby you are mine...

Author's Note

sitting in the Madhouse...
i don't think that this one deserves a review...

Reviews

[ron]

This is very good glitch. You are a great writer, you have passion and it shows in your poems.

[Laminators Dubai]

Yeah
and that's the problem....its not just passion inside...there is still a brain....a kid...

[ron]

You will learn that passion and love makes for a very strong poem or story. If you do not want to write about love then write about how nature makes you feel.

[Laminators Dubai]

That's the best idea !

[ron]

:) I'm happy to help glitch.