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Reviews

[melril18]

This is very nice. I love how it flows, and the last line is very unusual and cool! Good work!

[Laminators Dubai]

unusual is good. entertains. thanks melril18 :)

[Laminators Dubai]

unusual is good. entertains. thanks melril18 :)

[WriteWright]

CUT THE MOON IN HALF! interesting hyperbole :)

[Laminators Dubai]

well at that point, it was. :/

[Vidya Bacchus]

Very nice little write.Most romantic to feel that way for someone,like you could cut tha moon in half for them.

[Laminators Dubai]

thank you so much! I'm so happy that you liked it!^^

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are most welcome:)

[Fernando Dardón]

I like it! very melodic. Looks like the kind of message I would text to my girlfriend when she's got a awful day. PURE LOVE

[Laminators Dubai]

yes for sure...thanks pal^^

[Annie]

The power and wings that you offer love in this poem is wonderful. I painted a picture that, through these wings, the speaker was able to fly up to the moon, and cut it in half. One part for the speaker, the other part for the lover.

[Laminators Dubai]

i always like to offer love for everyone...thanks annie, im happy you liked it so much^^

[Night]

Pretty and sweet, you wrote of pure love that shines upon us mortals. I loved it!

[Laminators Dubai]

thank you so much night^^

[Night]

You are very welcome!

[An owl on the moon]

You make such a joyful moment filled with love... a love that can make miracles happen. :)

[Laminators Dubai]

yeah it is beautiful sir, its love nothing else.
thanks for coming^^

[V. P. Trujillo]

Hah, short & sweet. Very suiting being on a card-like format.

[Laminators Dubai]

yeah, gotta look good^^.......thanks V.P.^^!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[V. P. Trujillo]

Hah, I love your enthusiasm.

[V. P. Trujillo]

It's making me start every sentence with "hah". o_o

[Laminators Dubai]

LOOKS LIKE I'M A PRETTY SUCCESSFUL POET...HUN?

[V. P. Trujillo]

Indeed, seems so.

[Great Aunt Astri]

Bravo Glitch. Different from your usual style ... more sophistocated!

[Laminators Dubai]

Yeah... Love change you anyhow right...I like it wild anyway.
Thanks Astri ^^

[Great Aunt Astri]

Long live love (but continue with your studies!!!!!)

[Laminators Dubai]

yeah.....i know, im a student first and being a girl is after or maybe last.

[Great Aunt Astri]

The best things in life and worth waiting for!

[Laminators Dubai]

Yes...true love worth a true wait...