The Earth May Die Soon ( Part 1)

Rachel, Cherry and Ryan are friends.

One day, they went to the beach to play, they built sand castle and played very happily. Suddenly, there was a big crashed. Then Ryan said “ What is that?”, Cherry replied “ I think it was a big rock from the space.’’. “ Let’s us tell to the Space Office!” Rachel said. “ Of course.” Cherry and Ryan replied. Then, many small stones fell on the beach...

Reviews

[Fontane Wong]

I'm looking foward to Part 2. Add it soon! An interesting story for Part 1. Nice job!

[Gloria]

I will add it after mid-term test.

[Jennifer Sum]

I want to read part 2 also,please write it fast

[Isaac]

I WANTED TO READ THE PART 2 BECAUSE IT IS VERY INTERESTING!

[yoyo]

How about 'Part 2'???