Space story stuff

A story of humans from different planets in a human Galactic command fight against an unknown race of aliens, over control of the largest planet in the entire universe "Eden"

~The story line~

Story takes place around 100 or so years from now, a more advanced earth will be around 200-300 year more advance then our own earth

On his way to Eden, a popular planet that Different species and different human races have all fought over, the main Character was in a devastating crash; he was forced to cut of and singe his hand after crashing landing on a strange planet he had to survive alone picking up survival strategies and ways to fix certain technology, and radios to gain contact with the HGC, after finding him the HGC found out that he was more then a regular soldier and could survive extreme conditions and that the part of his brain that was ment to feel pain was shut off, after finding more people like him they made a team of soldiers called the "Chaos team" of the greatest soldiers in the army
The main character being the first soldier created, became the lead General and the highest ranking soldier in all of the HGC's army of supersoldiers, the Chaos teams first mission was to drop on the front lines and take an alien hardware base on a planet close to the humans of the HGC, the planet will be the main base to help super soldiers cope with what they are becoming and will train them for the future battle for Eden against the aliens

(If possible I would like some ideas for planet names for a 2nd EarthLike planet for a human race that died and the super soldiers planet aswell, I can't really think of any names for a modern earth with future space travel and space technology.)

Author's Note

(So far this is the main storyline, not much writing for the story line but I have a folder with alot more writing on it with information on the aliens/soldiers/planets/ships, and so much more info

I know my writing isent the best I figure if I write it the way I do with my minor writing skills I could get someone to edit the story for me and help it make sense. I'm not looking for advice on my writing skill I usually learn as I go

I write on my iPhone in a note app and I may misspell some words, if you are confused with a word post a review and I will change it and tell you what the word should be I am sorry in advance for grammar and spelling)

Reviews

[FantasyGal]

This looks like it could be really interesting! I can't wait to read it! :)

- Helen x

[Andy Toews]

Thank you, I was hoping people would like it, I have ideas for more story's, some stuff even to do with fantasy, mainly a werewolf vampire hunter kind of thing, with dragons/demons, and all that good stuff. But right now it's a mess in my notes :/ so I'm still trying to work things out