How can this be

How can this be

A Poem by Jeremia
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12-9-12

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How can this be

What you have for me

When everything is leading away

 

How can I hold on

When everything seems wrong

When nothing seems to confirm

 

Father,

How can I press forward

To what I believe you have made for me

When everything is telling me it can’t be

 

Father,

What would you have me do

As I strive to press into you

 

Father,

How can it be

What am I doing wrong

What do I need to do

 

Father,

Help me through

© 2012 Jeremia


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This one touched me, this is softly spoken, very nicely written

Posted 12 Years Ago


Jeremia

12 Years Ago

Thank you very much. :D Care to share what about it touched you? If you are able?
rnuff

12 Years Ago

All the ones that start with Father, feels like a comforting question. "Like am I good enough" kind .. read more
Jeremia

12 Years Ago

Cool. Thank you.

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Jeremia
Jeremia

St Cloud, MN



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Well, my name is Jeremia. I honestly don't believe I have much skill in writing, but I find it entertaining when I am able to crank out a poem and/or story. So my desire is to write and then get feedb.. more..

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