Visionary

I live in my mind, it's where I'm most happy. This is just a piece of it.

Visionary

My silence speaks volumes
I say so much although my lips are still
my mind is continuously going 250mph
there's not enough hours in a lifetime to elaborate on the thoughts that are gliding through my mind
my thoughts flow like the Nile
not even the most gifted librarian in the world could sort through my mental library
I'm still so young yet my eyes have seen the most horrific of things
how do I even begin to explain
I don't
just let me be, let me think
let my mind do what it does best
wander
I don't have to speak anything
I let my pen and paper do the talking
it seems to be more effective anyways
I find comfort this way
beautiful harmonies and melodies accompany my silence and helps me think
it's so serene, I could dwell in this moment for eternity
living in my thoughts to escape reality
there's no disappointment here
I'm in control of my dreams, I like it this way
dreamer at heart, if only I could live here forever
and ever
will you escape here with me
our own little Utopia
here there is freedom, individuality, happiness, acceptance
in a society so cruel, I escape for peace
dreaming with my eyes open
my alternate world
you're never too old to dream and let your imagination go free
there's no shame in being child-like again
the THC makes it so much better
floating on clouds and touching the stars without leaving the comfort of my bed
weightlessness
come join me..
open up that mind of yours, let your creative juices flow
take off those blinders, remove the chains, don't be afraid to think the "craziest" of thoughts
nothing is off limits, don't hold back
let your mind go free
disconnect from what "they" told you and reconsider anything and everything
the limit goes beyond the sky
just let go
let go
just let go..
be free
go deeper
don't be afraid, it's only just begun

Author's Note

I'd love to know what everyone thought about it..

Reviews

[Jibey]

I love it that you find comfort in beautiful harmonies and melodies shared from a creative and passionate mind... 'our own little Utopia' - yes, where we can create wonderful pictures and stir our emotion, finding the freedom of letting go, of releasing our dreams and fantasies, achieving joyful orgasm in the essence of our beings... It is a consummation greatly to be desired, a wonderful blending of souls, a truly spiritual intercourse...plunging into the depths of the ocean's embrace soaring into the heavenly delights of the clear blue air.

Lovely thoughts so fluently expressed.

[Zami Mami]

Sometimes I love to escape this physical reality of my everyday life.. I transcend into the heavens knowing that here I have divine peace and I can have anything my soul desires. I am in control because I know I have never ending power.. There are few things more beautiful than spiritual awakening for me! :)

[AE]

I like the overall message of the poem and the way it's delivered, but I think it would be better with punctuation. Some poetry like to use enjambed lines and you read it straight through, but without punctuation, it made it much harder to understand everything you were trying to put out there. I know you understand syntax because of lines 10 "I don't," 13 "wander," and 29 "dreaming with eyes open." Which I love by the way. They show a sort of boldness in character all because of how they're placed. Great job overall though, thoroughly enjoyed it.

[Zami Mami]

Thank you for your constructive critism, I will defintely take that into consideration on my future works. I appreciate your kind words! :)

[K.N. Herzner]

I really like this and totally relate! This is an amazing and raw piece to me! I totally understand the escaping reality part! I love this! Keep it up!:)

[Zami Mami]

Thank you so much, this is me living in my head! I appreciate your opinion! :)

[Joshua Carl Cruz]

Yeah the THC helps, doesn´t it? I felt pushed around the page a bit but prose always feels like I´m caught in someone elses washmachine. Thanks for your words.

[Zami Mami]

My pleasure, thank you for reading and relating to my writing. Your opinion means a lot to me!