The Last Thing

It is all dark
Then all light
I can feel myself fall
Deeper in to an endless sleep
Where I would
Not wake up
Not for anyone
I feel the coldness
Getting closer
And closer
Making me feel numb
Solely I close my eyes
For the last time
Thinking someone help me
My lungs are getting tighter
And tighter
And tighter
I draw my last breath
So I can scream
Scream was the last thing I did

Reviews

[Dalebear]

This poem is sad I felt every word and every bit of pain, wonderful expression write. Well done keep up the masters work

Dalebear

[mamabear]

This poem is so sad. I felt every word. Beautifully written. Congratulations. keep the good work up. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.

Mamabear xxxxxxx