The Kiss

This is the one that started all this kissing nonsense lol

 

 

The Kiss

your kiss is like a drug to me,

your lips be oh so tender

I just can't get enough you see,

feel like I'm on a bender

I kiss your neck, your ear, so sweet,

I breathe your wisp of lavender

you have swept me off my feet,

take it all in like a scavenger

collecting all, so I need not worry,

about when you are away

I yearn for your sweet kiss my love,

every night and day

I hold you fast in my embrace,

like a changeling seeking out its host

I tell everyone about my love for you,

yes, I admit I like to boast,

for you are the only one my love,

the only one of whom I dream

walking hand in hand in summers sun,

or by nights bright moonbeam

when you're not here with me,

I know that something is amiss

then all my fears vanish into night,

when again your lips I kiss

Gomer LePoet...

Author's Note

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Reviews

[?]

This one swept me off my feet...such wonderful rhyming
Love Faith Hill and this song.."This Kiss"
Ya know..I think a kiss can be so much more than just a kiss...think about it...
A most beautiful and wonderfully written piece...if this is about you..boy you got it bad..lol
Love this;)

[Bunny Thumper]

WHat a sweet poem..
I lovve it !
How embracing!

[Ruth]

Perfection, really lovely sweet
xx

[Liza]

a very innocent and sweet expression of the magical feeling one acknowledges in the power of shared magical kisses :)

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Aw, it is beautiful ... sounds like the perfect kiss!
Romantic and just lovely too from lovely you!

Chloe

[Dupree]

Wow, this is amazing. I absolutely adore this poem. It's so sweet and romantic. You coould melt even the iciest heart with this. Hell I know it made me think of my boyfriend, if he told me something like this I'd probably blush and try to hide. As usual, my friend, your form is amazing and your wording is perfect. Looking forward to reading more from you.

-Dupree

[SamBug]

This was amazing. Great job!!!

[Desert Dreamer]

This one deserves to be set to music..I look forward to hearing it. A great love poem!

[Rory CJ Frankson]

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Nice poem Gome, I like that for you it was pretty straight forward and the tongue an cheek was not in it. I liked the sentiment and the feel of love you have for you woman. Cool Bro. I liked th music deal too an that imbed was reall cool... I'm off to check out this site and see what it offer. Thanks man.
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[Wicahpi]

This is perfectly rhymed, flow is next to flawless
and the subject is sweet. Well done.