Séance de mise en forme intense (Intense Workout)

Séance de mise en forme intense (Intense Workout)

A Poem by Gomer LePoet

a workout at the gym turns into a mental workout


Séance de mise en forme intense (Intense Workout)

I try to workout diligently,

at least 3 times a week,

the muscles are tight and strong,

I'm certainly no geek,

I pump the iron, walk the track,

listen to my tunes,

but lately I've been distracted,

watching for ms June

She's quite the lovely lady,

recently moved to this place,

she is French, with sweet accent,

puts smiles on my face,

vous êtes l'homme élégant she says to me,

her eyes sparkle bright,

I have no idea what that means,

so I just smile with delight

sometimes she reaches out,

and touches me on my arm,

de tels forts muscles she says,

and this makes me warm,

I need to study French I guess,

so I won't look the fool,

for all I know, there is a chance,

she is calling me a tool

the thing that's bad about this all,

is I work out way too long,

trying to impress this girl,

make her think I am King Kong,

now my muscles are getting sore,

I'm working way to hard,

if I keep this up much more,

I'll be searching for my doctor's card

Gomer LePoet...

© 2010 Gomer LePoet

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i will go and study french and then run to the gym to get me one of them, too

Posted 9 Years Ago

I loved the incorporation of the French, and not just the French woman, it urged the flow and rhythm right to where it needed to be. What we do to impress others, even if they're already satisfied with what we've got. Excellent poem:)

Posted 10 Years Ago

Bless your heart, grab a cuppa, or a beer and chill for a week hon lol

Posted 10 Years Ago

Such a funny story! You tell it well with your rhymes...sometimes we try to hard to impress when being ourselves is good enought.

Posted 10 Years Ago

too funny! i enjoyed reading this very much.

Posted 10 Years Ago

Amusing. You are good at taking all kinds of settings and making them come alive for your light poetic feel.

Posted 10 Years Ago

A wonderful story. Those french woman can make you stronger or may kill you. I like the complete story. What men do for the woman? A excellent poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago

What a sweet poem and so true about how people try, way to hard, to impress each other. It was quite well written and an easy read!

Posted 10 Years Ago

This is very cute and so well written
WOnderful rhyme and flow.
I enjoyed reading this one.

Posted 10 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on April 26, 2010
Last Updated on June 27, 2010


Gomer LePoet
Gomer LePoet

Tampa, FL

I am a former IT Manager/Consultant working for many Fortune 500 companies, mainly in the Banking, Telecommunications industry. I am also a part time musician, playing guitars and keyboards and writ.. more..


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