Séance de mise en forme intense (Intense Workout)

a workout at the gym turns into a mental workout

 

Séance de mise en forme intense (Intense Workout)

I try to workout diligently,

at least 3 times a week,

the muscles are tight and strong,

I'm certainly no geek,

I pump the iron, walk the track,

listen to my tunes,

but lately I've been distracted,

watching for ms June

She's quite the lovely lady,

recently moved to this place,

she is French, with sweet accent,

puts smiles on my face,

vous êtes l'homme élégant she says to me,

her eyes sparkle bright,

I have no idea what that means,

so I just smile with delight

sometimes she reaches out,

and touches me on my arm,

de tels forts muscles she says,

and this makes me warm,

I need to study French I guess,

so I won't look the fool,

for all I know, there is a chance,

she is calling me a tool

the thing that's bad about this all,

is I work out way too long,

trying to impress this girl,

make her think I am King Kong,

now my muscles are getting sore,

I'm working way to hard,

if I keep this up much more,

I'll be searching for my doctor's card

Gomer LePoet...

Reviews

[aftervision]

i will go and study french and then run to the gym to get me one of them, too

[Albatross]

I loved the incorporation of the French, and not just the French woman, it urged the flow and rhythm right to where it needed to be. What we do to impress others, even if they're already satisfied with what we've got. Excellent poem:)

[Ruth]

lol
Bless your heart, grab a cuppa, or a beer and chill for a week hon lol
xx

[Desert Dreamer]

Such a funny story! You tell it well with your rhymes...sometimes we try to hard to impress when being ourselves is good enought.

[Wicahpi]

too funny! i enjoyed reading this very much.

[The Analog Kid]

Amusing. You are good at taking all kinds of settings and making them come alive for your light poetic feel.

[Coyote Poetry]

A wonderful story. Those french woman can make you stronger or may kill you. I like the complete story. What men do for the woman? A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Christina May Shanaberg]

What a sweet poem and so true about how people try, way to hard, to impress each other. It was quite well written and an easy read!

[deeps]

This is very cute and so well written
WOnderful rhyme and flow.
I enjoyed reading this one.