Incantations of a Madman

Let if Flow

Incantations of a Madman

do I cast a spell with words of magic

is this just a mantra of proportional tragic

be it of Old English or maybe Germanic

sending ones self into a manic panic

are you one who is a giver or taker

trying to steal her smile you can't mistake her

be ye poet or simple candle maker

behind a mask truly a faker

Mesopotamian pow-wows and Gaelic chants

spiritual wisdom disguised as rants

from deep pockets of knee high pants

Cinderella slippers at a ballroom dance

wave your hand create a Carmen or prayer

conjure up visions of hell if you dare

whispered Yajna like you really care

the fire of Vishnu behind the glare

oh ye of troubled heart and mind

seek out the treasures left behind

feel the breath of tides that bind

bow your heads see what you find

Gomer LePoet....

Reviews

[J. J. Nightingale]

I always wondered if all that really works .. but no matter .. This be way cool !!

Jazzy Jazz .. Peace Out

[just is]

Mesopotamian pow-wows and Gaelic chants

Not aure really what Mesopotamian means or Gaelic...
But i love this, it's quite intrguing and interesting.
Love the flow and rhyme schemes.

[?]

This is interesting...rhyming is great
The last stanza I like alot...
oh ye of troubled heart and mind
seek out the treasures left behind
feel the breath of tides that bind
bow your heads see what you find

(Seek or search from and within the heart)

[Coyote Poetry]

A very interesting poem. I do my best to not create spell or bring back things that need to stay dead.
"wave your hand create a Carmen or prayer
conjure up visions of hell if you dare
whispered Yajna like you really care
the fire of Vishnu behind the glare"
A nice ending to a outstanding poem my friend.
Coyote

[Poetic Beauty]

Spells, chants and prayers all wrapped into one smooth piece that weaves a story. I like the ease and the mystery in this piece.