Three Wings

Three Wings

A Poem by Making Tracks

Why do your eyes do that, wanting

The freedom of light and darkness of night

A friends strength and a wonderful sight

How come your light is just is, freedom?

 

Your soul shines and so touchable

No door to hold me you give me faith

Watching over me, making me feel safe

Have I found your colours, they shine?

 

Together, let me be a part of you

We can float away from this crowd

Away from ignorance too loud

Just you and I, Waiting!

© 2010 Making Tracks


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Very rhythmic... flows excellently and sounds almost like a song.. I could hear a piano or a guitar playing to the words. I like it. You are very talented.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Simply breathtaking. A beautiful write =]

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Making Tracks
Making Tracks

Leeds, West Yorkshire, United Kingdom



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A Poem by Making Tracks