Affair.

Affair.

A Poem by Yet, Nobody...? Here.
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Tight-lipped.
Rationale beleaguered.
Soldered passing lingers.
Tacit is the stairwell signal.
Needing nescience - gone away.

© 2013 Yet, Nobody...? Here.


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Very good economical use of words.
Short pieces like this sometimes take more work than longer pieces because you need to choose each bit so carefully, but you chose each bit well and created a full picture (and more importantly I think, a full emotion).
Have you tried writing haiku?
I think you'd be very good at it.
Keep up the good work!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Yet, Nobody...? Here.

11 Years Ago

Thanks, Sydney. I really appreciate your feedback and suggestions.

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Added on December 31, 2012
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