Time

Time

A Poem by Gray Witch
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Trying to answer the question

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What is time?
It is the space between events
The measurement of that distance
A recurrent rhythmical series
All contrived by man 
Trying to make sense of his universe.

© 2012 Gray Witch


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Yes time can be those things, although in some cultures there are no words to describe past or future events , so presumably no words to decribe time either!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Gray Witch

11 Years Ago

Really? I wasn't aware since I thought most cultures saw the passing of the seasons and the study of.. read more
william keepers

11 Years Ago

Actually, there were a few Native American tribes that had no conception of the passage of time. Unf.. read more
This is really profound GW! From my perspective, as a student of Taoism, your answer is really good. Time being "contrived by man to "Try", "to make sence of (his?) universe" Is, well..., perfect! (his?) in parenthesis' is not meant to imply correction, but rather I see it as and excellent segway into another question; Is man so arrogant as to call it "his" universe? Sadly, I think so...
To sum up the words you have written here (again from my perspective), we need to trascend time to truly make sence of our universe. This is an outstanding poem Leslie! Indeed thought provoking on a universal level!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Gray Witch

11 Years Ago

Thank you ... "We aim to please" ...
Well, a good start for sure. I think you may need more "time" to explore this concept... ;-)
A relative concept indeed!
Quality write dear Gray.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Gray Witch

11 Years Ago

LOL.... always can use "more time".....and always have as long as I have....
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You are right what is time? I never have enough time to do the things I want to get done. I just love coming to read your poems as they usually make me think or I can relate to them:)
Great job Gray

Posted 11 Years Ago


Gray Witch

11 Years Ago

Thanks... Apparently Alan Alda (of MASH fame) is a 'visiting' professor at some U.S. university and .. read more
kimmy

11 Years Ago

Wow that is so cool. I am going to check that out:) Thank you so much.

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Ms Daniels, (AKA - GrayWitch) is an Environmental and Social Activist, Communications Consultant to local and provincial governments, and former Nurse. She has studied Sociology, Criminology and Devia.. more..

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