If you knew

If you knew

A Poem by Green
"

Deep inside me

"

If you only knew

The me who lives inside

The total reject

Loner me

The one who'd rather

Hide from sight

I opened up

Trusting you

And see where that's

Gotten me.

© 2012 Green


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Wow this is amazing. This reminds me of my past. That one girl. I was the shy guy in school, I opened up to her and it was the worst mistake of my life. I don't regret it, it is a part of me. How you managed to capture such a pivotal point in my life, how you managed to sum up such feeling in only 32 words is phenomenal and at such a young age as well. This was a very enjoyable read and it makes me reflect on better times.

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nice :)

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very nice.

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Beautiful. Just beautiful.

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A beautiful piece that shows the such painful loneliness and the beginning of trust.

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Aww!! Really great poem! I love it! :)

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Great short and to the point of poem. You can feel that you are upset, this is sad, but I am glad you shared this :)

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Very simple, short and full of upset. Good job!

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I'm living in the good ol' south of the US of A. Professionally, I'm an engineer and I guess that means I'm supposed to know things. I don't always. I write because I can, and because I can write word.. more..

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