The matter of spirit and the spirit of matter

Inspired by Makosicas' poem "Untitled"

I am of pure spirit 

Existing in a form 

Of eloquent emptiness

I am alive in a world of

Spirited hollow illusion 

And when I ascend

This tangible world

Return to the place of creation

Amongst the spirits of all

True freedom I will be

Pure Spirit I am

Reviews

[Ruth]

This is stunning! Yes, this plain is nothing more than a stop gap! True freedom and home are the other side, where the true spirit is free! xx

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Greg, this is such a wise poem in my eyes. Profound words to me are true.
Beautiful.

Chloe

[LA Lorena]

This is so full of promise, hope and inspiration. The end of life is often looked upon with fear, but this makes one believe in eternities of a different sort.

[Tony]

Liberating work, I really feel the energy you invoke here-- how invigorating!

[imawriter]

the body may die, the energy of our spirit/soul lives on. There is so much said in this small piece of writing. I love it

[Alvin L. Kathembe]

I am alive in a world of
Spirited hollow illusion
great work!concise and astute...and very powerful as well.

And when I ascend
This tangible world
Return to the place of creation
Amongst the spirits of all
True freedom I will be
Pure Spirit I am

[EmpressPoetess]

Beautiful! Eloquent!