Sparks

There are points of life

In my light

There are points of light

In my life

 

All these little sparks

Ignite me

Glimmers of the past

Delight me

 

Blinking flowing points

Swirl memories

Enlivened strands of life

                                Bend tenderly

 

There are points of life

In my light

There are points of light

In my life

Reviews

[Sarah Redigan]

i love the reiteration gives your words a ton of feeling

[Greg Skura]

I wrote this after watching a biography/concert about Chantal Kreviazuk, it needs a little something it will come

[Nautili]

it would make a nice refrain for a song.

[EmpressPoetess]

Great points and wondeful rhyme and flow. A powerful write.