Just a Shell

REALLY old poem I wrote awhile ago. Please nothing too harsh.

Love is lost.
 When shall it be found?
  For me that answer is never.
   I cannot cope with any more hurt.
    Hurt is what I do best.
     If you don't like it then just leave this place now
      And never return my broken mangled heart to my black hollow shell
       The one you once called beautiful.

Author's Note

please when reviewing don't be too harsh.

Reviews

[Rob Santana]

This is actually pretty. Good. Hey remember, we all started somewhere.

[A.J.]

i dont think love exists on this planet any longer...