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Beyond the surface

Beyond the surface

A Poem by Grimshaw

like the black and the blue
Combine in illusion
To stretch infinitely beyond
All the stars
And
The
Universes,
I too have a mask
Yet no one cares to look beyond it
Thus my universe stays undiscovered
And my stars do not bring pleasure.

© 2014 Grimshaw


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Beautiful illustration of the universe parallel to our personalities and life outlooks. Keep on sharing on Writers Cafe!

Posted 9 Years Ago
Wonderful poem. Like you say in your bio - you love short bursts of expression and reading this poem, I can see why. Beautiful and mysterious at the same time, while filling my mind with imagery. Takes talent to convey so much with so little. Kudos.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Grimshaw

9 Years Ago

Thank you for the comment and reading!

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Grimshaw
Grimshaw

South Africa



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I love short burts of expression. My writing in inspired by e e cimmings, stephen cranes poem in the desert. Currently working on a short stoy, and my favorite form to write in is free verse. more..

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