Unconditional love

Unconditional love

A Poem by Forbidden love

Waking up, realizing to yourself you know what??

 

I CAN DO THIS.

 

no longer will the opinions of others get me down.

 

no longer will i hide the feelings that are wrapped up inside me

 

i just can't..

 

but unfortunately i must..

 

because you see it is not the gossip, the opinions of others, even the loss of friends that i care about.

 

its the words " I forbid you to.." coming from my household

 

that are causing me to hesitate..

 

but the day will soon come, the day of my birth, the day that i am free..

 

that is the day that i will let my true feelings be known..the day i will confess everything to them.

 

for then they have no power over me..over us

© 2008 Forbidden love


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boom chaka laka boom! well said child well said

Posted 15 Years Ago


GUESS WHAT I WEN THROUGH THE SAME THING YOU DID ... IT WAS HARD AND THE DAY I TURNED 18 I WAS LIKE SCREW EVERYONE AND I GOT MARRIED TO MY NOW HUSBAND AND EVERY ONE WAS WRONG AND WE ARE VERY HAPPY SO IF THIS POEM IS BASED ON TRUE LIFE JUST HANG IN THERE!!

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on June 22, 2008
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Forbidden love
Forbidden love

Key West, FL



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I'm Cuban and I've come to be 17 years of age. Life on this place we call Earth is crazy. Need know more? Just ask.. more..

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