Second chance. my own song (maybe someone could relate)

Song i recently wrote. i would love to hear our comments,opinion,critique Thanks, hope you like it.

Song: Second chance

when I was happy,I did not care

for things that everyone Did

there was a girl, and she meant the world to me.

the happy days are over, and no one lives along

the happiness was stolen within the memories

the people i loved,looked so differently

why were they walking so separately

every day and moment, was like the history

all the same problems and even mysteries

I was left alone to live so desperately

and I felt the agony

the happy places now are gone

everything what I have done

reflects like a mirror on my wall

I see every little thing

all the pain I'v been through

now i'm sitting in this empty hall 

waiting days for my last call

you changed my past,i changed the futures paths

but, if we meet again, I know, that I would love you once more

and let go of you never again...

Reviews

[Niklavs]

i really appreciate that. tnx

[Vidya Bacchus]

this is a good song.I.am sure it would sound great put to music ,great job