I CAN FIND YOU

"Acknowledging Greatness"

Greater is no greater
than thee
for you O' Father
are tranquility.
You are the vast
of the vast
you see...
When you say
I am
You are indeed.

I look to the sky
and stars away...
in my minds eye
even farther I stray.
Still going
universes away...
my mind goes for days
and days
and still you are greater...
so great, I can't say.

Then in the darkness
of a small room...
on bended knees
alone as entombed.
Through happy or sad
contentment or gloom...
I can find you.

I CAN FIND YOU.

Reviews

[John Phoenix Hutchinson..]

What a good poem this is. I find it hard to believe am first to comment on it. Ah but then your a newbie, so am sure praise will follow this fine piece eventually.

[Gypsy Dreamer]

Thank you sweet John.

[Kasandra Browning]

Robin, I so love this poem. I am so proud of you and all that you have accomplished. Valley girl has got skills...love you Robin. Keep up the great writing. I look forward to reading each and every one of them. They are so meaningful, especially when you know the story behind a lot of them.

[Gypsy Dreamer]

Kasandra, if I haven't commented on your review, I am so sorry. I looked at your page to see and saw nothing. I havent' been on here much lately and I don't always look at my reviews so I guess I missed this one but it is a beautiful review and I thank you from the bottom of my heart.