I'm Not Impressed!

I'm Not Impressed!

A Poem by Yina
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Somewhat of a rant

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I'm so not impressed with how judgmental this world is!

What's wrong with darker or lighter skin?

It's all beautiful an we're all the same on the inside

What's wrong with different clothes?

It all covers your body (for the most part anyway)

What's wrong with living on this street or in that town?

It's all on this earth an all created by God

What's wrong with going to this school?

They all teach you pretty much the same thing

What's wrong with going to this church?

We all have our own beliefs

So you stick to your life an I'll stick to mine

You watch what you do an I'll watch mine

Let's all be fair an not judge others alright?

God made us all equal

Noone is better then the next

© 2011 Yina


Author's Note

Yina
How I feel about the judging in this world. It's not fair!

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Really love poetry like this, fighting the major topics in society. I do wonder sometimes why there is so much hate in the world, why strangers and even friends are seen with distrust, with the ability to hurt rather than care. I liked this poem, good job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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How true, how real, how full-frontal great this poem is! Dearling, i do love it!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Right on, nice write and words

Posted 12 Years Ago


0 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Hear, hear!

Posted 12 Years Ago


0 of 8 people found this review constructive.

Agreed! Nice:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


0 of 4 people found this review constructive.

I titally agree! it's on ehte inside that counts,but we're all guilty of feeling superficial one way or another. great write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


0 of 7 people found this review constructive.

Really love poetry like this, fighting the major topics in society. I do wonder sometimes why there is so much hate in the world, why strangers and even friends are seen with distrust, with the ability to hurt rather than care. I liked this poem, good job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I completely agree! why can we as a people be more open hearted? Just like I said in my blog, my friend told me all people really care about is themselves anymore. There needs to be a change, in the way we teach at home, at school at play.
thats mean teach you children whats right and whats wrong. At school when you know someone is being hurt stand up for then when you know the person doing the hurting stop them. when you are with your friends help each other do what you know is right :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amen! I so agree with you.

Posted 12 Years Ago


0 of 4 people found this review constructive.

I agree, judging people the world is not fair. You did a good job.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Yina
Yina

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