Swimming Love

toe goes first 

water so cold

dip the foot

shake off the shivers

two feet

both on the step

inching in

up to the thigh

hits your tummy

loose your breath

up in water

up to your chest

teeth chatter

heart pounds

head going in

your whole body

going down

under now

looking up

sparkling sunshine

legs kicking

all about

warming up

come up 

for air

gasp at life

memory set

remember again

love and pools

cold to warm

slowly keeping

constant form

Reviews

[Firestone Feinberg]

Perfect, as always. A pleasure to read you and know you!

[Holly Mason]

Thank you much...Lucas on the back of a Bronco's jersey going to be SWEET!and Jack will be having his first grandchild over the weekend it is also a grandson you 2 should have a cigar together*)thank you for reading

[Distant horizons]

Nicely done. Never thought of love and pools being so similar until now.

[Holly Mason]

like what miss frieda said this could be about many things in life*)thank you much for reading always

[Frieda P]

This could be about almost anything in life, water, relationships, politics, religion. I'm one of those stupid people that dives right in like a fool...maybe I should try your method next time, not sure if it sounds less painful, more cautious I guess. Good read Holly!

[Holly Mason]

thank you.....pool party at WC I will bring the hot dogs you got the lobster tails right*)

[Frieda P]

ha...sure, anything for you!! ;-)

[Jack...]

Well you have describe it perfectly, thse moments when you first step in always feel so cold, it is funny how quickly the water warms up once you play. Very nice.

[Holly Mason]

was actually thinking of how many times you will have to do this again*)

[Jack...]

I'm sure you are