Cheat

lurking behind

under the awning

watching with eyes

so devilishly appalling

creepy man

with the death

of a star

driving along

in satan's car

screeching tires

ghastly brakes

by giving her death

he forgives

his mistakes 

Reviews

[riskrapper]

wonderful lyricism in your poetry Holly
me thinks theres a song writer
yearning to be free

[Holly Mason]

I am narrowing down...I just started writing again 6 weeks ago after 20 years of blinking with no thinking so fun so fun tralalatyrallala *)thank you sooo much truly

[hundi]

i like whats left to fill in

[Holly Mason]

fill in the blanks with personal thoughts...makes a reader wonder or think I am nuts!!hahahathank you very much for reading*)

[A. H. Pinley]

In many cases less is more in music, why not in poetry?

[Holly Mason]

I am enjoying leaving all my hot air out and getting emotion to spark with few words*)thank you for reading

[Areeba]

It is really good in a creepy, dark way, you've certainly got a way with words, I really like it!

[Holly Mason]

I am starting to love sparking emotions with few words maybe it is my place I have been looking*)thank you so much for reading truly

[emmajoy]

Unsure of the scenario to be honest, but this romps from lurk to scream to death to self.retribution - so many emotions in a few words, finely put.

[Holly Mason]

thank you kindly I love to see what writing brings out in the reader and what it brings out in me as well

[Frieda P]

This gave me chills Holly, not sure if this is to be taken literally or not...still, death is death, no matter faulty breaks or however it happened, no one could forgive themselves for that one.

[Holly Mason]

wanted to write chilly yesterday still exploring still finding my place...thank you so much for reading

[Frieda P]

I understand and my pleasure...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

okay this is intense...

did you mean "satan's car"?

i may be way off...but i got a guy cheating on his wife...and then he kills his mistress, either literally or figuratively...and thinks that assuages his guilt.

[Holly Mason]

thank you correction will be fixed*)and yes he will be guilt free no matter the cost