Snap

The air is good today

winds are changing

peaceful in ways

The earth is beautiful today

landscape is changing

relaxing in ways

SNAP

The air is suffocating today

winds are dead

horrible ways

The earth is trashy today

landscape is dry

pressuring in ways

SNAP

 

The air is tired today

winds are gone

suffocating in ways

SNAP

The earth is confusing today

landscape escapes me

killing in ways

SNAP

tired,killing,dry,trashy,suffocating

SNAP

peaceful,good,beautiful,relaxing

SNAP

make it stop

Reviews

[Distant horizons]

And it can be all of those things in such a short time. Nicely done Holly

[Holly Mason]

thank SNAP you*)

[Distant horizons]

:-)

[steppenwolf]

I like how you are experimenting with different ways of structuring your poems. Quite refreshing!

[Holly Mason]

I am honestly not sure about structure I try to write it just like it comes out...even with my poor spelling*)thank you so for your refreshing review

[Sami Khalil]

Bravo. I like how unique this poem is in structure and how you conveyed reality in absolute details. Thank you for penning...:)

[Holly Mason]

thank you for reading..truly

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...My pleasure...:)

[Frieda P]

Ha so true, so true my friend, a moment can make all the difference in the world...you always write in simple terms yet complex emotions that wow me, and make it so relatable...good one!

[Holly Mason]

SNAP only takes a second and something changed...maybe a mood the sun something changed I like to keep it on simple terms it makes it easier for people to feel it..I think anyway thank you much for your good-one lovin it

[zainul]

Wonderful!
Amazing!
Love your great way to express your feelings with the change of time.

[Holly Mason]

thank you so for reading as well as your kind words

[zainul]

You are most welcome,dear friend :)