Miss Calculated

She can add, she can subtract

welcome the endearing

Miss Calculate

she thought she knew it all

but then did some bad math

correcting it seems the heavy aftermath

you were nice,honest,open,and true blue

those are all pluses 

now for the minus of you

Miss Calculate

used the wrong math tool

the minuses out weigh the pluses 

when she got to the true

so she minuses the fact

that you are never around

minus the man who always

puts others down

minus all the pluses

Miss Calculate

now sees 

that adding up to your measures

no one can ever be

so she tallied the score

and walked out the door

knowing truly

what love math was for

Miss Calculate

miscalculated her way

but with a new clear view

she will not look for another you

Reviews

[Frieda P]

You're too clever Holly, I really don't like math one bit, but I really do like what you've done with it in this piece....very nicely pen'd. Sometimes it adds up....

[Holly Mason]

yes it does little momma
thank you very much

[Jack...]

This adds up to be one great write. The sum of its parts leaves me with the equation of something very cool. Very nicely done.

[Holly Mason]

divisible by 2
thank you fine sir

[PP]

Wow Holly, What a Math???

Really creative and coool :)

[Holly Mason]

thank you so very much