Simply Uplifting

simply uplifting

narrowly drifting

shaker pan sifting

heart forever gifting

conscience living

soul is giving

simply uplifting

to be forgiving 

Reviews

[ANTO]

"heart forever gifting" - a descriptor for all the lovely people in the world and an ideal we could all aspire to as well Holly. Unfortunately it leaves the giver open to all the pain this world can inflict - but never stop giving. Its what makes you, YOU
A lovely poem indeed.
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[Holly Mason]

open to the pain- which makes an open door policy even more heartfelt*)
and just think without the pain- would we have learned all the stuff we know*)
thank you very much

[Baby Ricochet]

Short and to the point. Nice

[Holly Mason]

Thank you sir, truly

[Rita L. Sev]

Love this! Yes, when it is time for forgiveness, it is indeed uplifting! Well put, Holly!

[Holly Mason]

uplifting and not easy to do...so could ya forgive that poor fly*)*)*)
thank you teach

[Rita L. Sev]

Ha! Well, that fly went way over the line... LOL! :)

[❤ Maggie ❤..]

I agree with Jack! You captured it all in this short, sweet poem(: very well done!

[Holly Mason]

Thank you ...little pianist and song writer...

[❤ Maggie ❤]

Aw you are most welcome(:

[K. Louis]

Short, sweet and so true!

[Holly Mason]

thank you for reading much

[Jack...]

Holly, you have captured it all in a few short phrase. For being so tiny this piece screamed your message loud and clear. Very, very, very nice my friend.

[Holly Mason]

thank you fine sir and thanks for the very very's *)

[Frieda P]

Woo this is like a mantra, I need to read this a few times every day. I have a big problem with forgiveness, they tell me it's not for the other person, but for your own sanity, I guess that's why I'm crazy. Thanks for sharing this one Holly.

[Holly Mason]

so many hard things in life...forgiveness one of the hardest
somethings do not have to be forgiven some better to just be forgotten*)
thank you fine lady truly