Stained of Night

CREEK noise once again

seeping into death's trash bin 

racking, scrolling, jotting down

star bound wonder, never found

breathless body ,stained of night

may you rest peaceful in forever sight

a little whisper started the fire

loathing, hatred filled desire

CREEK noise once again

shaking off from where you've been

night stains the tattered soul

thinking all patrons are in the know

meant no harm with walking desires 

hearing whispers of alluring fire

walking, waiting, as the sunsets

starving naked, regrets the best bet

now a body, no more stains of night

may you rest peaceful in forever sight

Reviews

[prachi prangya agasti]

this is a very nice piece.. the imagery gave the feel of the poem u have described...

[Holly Mason]

thank you ...truly

[Angi]

Holly, this speaks of death and night. The creek sounds and wind whispering through the trees. Imagery gave me the creeps! Angi~

[Holly Mason]

well good then Steve had a goodnight of cuddles*) tell him I want the 5 bucks he promised hahahahread morewell good then Steve had a goodnight of cuddles*) tell him I want the 5 bucks he promised hahahah
thank you there peaches...That is how I think of ya as peaches thank you again

[Rita L. Sev]

This has a dark and ethereal feel to it, Holly - each creak echoes into the next stanza... Excellent piece!

[Holly Mason]

thank you so teach ...

[Jack...]

Wow Holly, I have been away way too long. This was fantastic, I loved it. The feel was kind of cosmic meets the shadows of earth. You have outdone your self on this one. Very nice my friend.

[Holly Mason]

so super very nice to see ya!!!
cosmic...I like that thought....thank you super fine sir

[Constance Payne]

"star bound wonder, never found"
I love this line....depending upon the reader it can change for them individually.

Often we seek so much that we never quite find.

Nice Read.

[Holly Mason]

love that pic*)
thank you so for your words

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"into death's trash bin"?

i really like "rest peaceful in forever sight"

like the near rhyme...like the scene painted as day turns to night, and all of its secrets..and mysteries.

[Holly Mason]

thank you fine sir, truly

[Tylar Salter]

This is fantastic. I loved it.

[Holly Mason]

and I thank you, very much

[Tylar Salter]

no problem