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AWHILE

AWHILE

A Poem by Holly Mason

a trace of you left on a road
a trace of me baring the heaviest load
conspiring theories rock the vein
gone for awhile but still quite sane
earthly being that casts the light
heading backwards looking left then right
making sense of the senseless seems
walking a road with only lost dreams
chasing them, run faster then life
over your shoulder toss all strife
loads will lighten dreams are in reach
but without these steps we could not teach
entities are empty until they feel pain
gone for awhile but still quite sane

© 2013 Holly Mason


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Poetry is a breather for healed emotions, and you have released a magnificent piece of work.
Thank you for sharing.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Your words really care, don't they, care about the person who's really and truly living life, taking the knocks, taking what's being thrown his/her way. But longside there's a powerful tho gently laid sense of survival, of reaching out for what's peeping out, waving, wanting to be seen, captured, taken with both hands. This is an inspiring post, one to return to ..

Your metre runs pretty well through the piece, you have a way, ' ..earthly being that casts the light ~ heading backwards looking left then right ~ making sense of the senseless seems ~ walking a road with only lost dreams. '


Posted 6 Years Ago


Life is sure a wicked task master and for you more so. Think of the days running through wheat field without a care Thats where you will find me ,find me waiting there To share a lunch bottle of wine and bury a time capsule for desert

Posted 6 Years Ago


It is so true that past regrets can stifle progress.....A fine poem Holly

Posted 6 Years Ago


Holly Mason

6 Years Ago

thank you fine sir...great words
Entities are empty until they feel pain

I think this is one of the best lines/thoughts I have ever read. This poem is dreamy, love it, and good to see you!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Holly Mason

6 Years Ago

Was thinkin about you the other day...truly was....the gift that you are to your family*)
than.. read more
Holls -- it has been AWHILE!! And I (we) miss you here at the cafe, hope you're on more!

MISS YOUUUUUU!!!! xoxoxo

Posted 6 Years Ago


Holly Mason

6 Years Ago

MISS YOU SO MUCH ....with kisses and a thank you little princess , Holly*)
so much courage beloved...
so much wisdom....
your journey blesses me
thank you Holly....

Posted 6 Years Ago


Holly Mason

6 Years Ago

no thank you ...much*)
Oh Holly, the beginning of this feels so sad to me. She has so much to do and as she follows this road, she keeps looking back. Finally, she decides enough is enough and she tosses all that baggage away. She is lighter now. At least, that is what I see.
Where have you been, anyway? Miss you, girl. Angi~

Posted 6 Years Ago


Holly Mason

6 Years Ago

just wanted a break for AWHILE (pun intended) hahah life and teen girls I have a senior this year s.. read more
Angi

6 Years Ago

I know all about that. Take it easy, girl. ...and don't be a stranger.
Nicely penned Holly and nice to see you here...Rose:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Holly Mason

6 Years Ago

hello fine miss Rose...very nice to see you as well and I thank ya much*)

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Holly Mason
Holly Mason

Rockledge, FL



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