Castle Walls

I can't stop them

my tears

 

Big, fat drops

running down my cheeks

hurry, get some mops

 

my saddness grows

the temperature drops

 

the bubble around me

my wall of defense

buit up over time

to protect you from the saddness

that flows from me

like slime

pops

 

My wall of defense

behind my castle walls

it's empty in here

why am I here?

It doesn't make sense

 

But I remember

too quickly

it pains me

it makes me sick

 

Colder than the winds in December

my empty castle walls

so here's a trick

so take your pick

 

you build up a wall of hate

my wall

built from my saddness

 

You try to get through my walls

But I can't hear you

my walls are too thick

 

You try to get in

you hit low in my hate

my walls crumble

 

I am scared

my walls have broken

my castle destroyed

 

You get me out of the rubble

with your soul, heart, and love

Reviews

[Sylvana]

For me, it was like the poem was telling a story and at the end, someone finally reaches the person and tries to save them, in a way.

I liked it, good job.