Departed Love

We were in love, you and me

but it was that love that blinded me to see

that the joy in your eyes

dimmed and was diminishing as it dries

you left me broken-hearted

Yearning for the love that had departed

Reviews

[A Drawer of Paper Roses]

Exactly why relationships are a risk

[Mary C]

A well written poem.

[ChaoticSoul]

I like how this is short and to the point, yet conveys complexity. I also love the use of alliteration :) nicely written.