Kingdom of Alice

Kingdom of Alice

A Poem by Hachamecha

Alice fell into wonderland 
The world of her dreams
With a blood red queen who kills with a flick of her hand
This kingdom is not what it seems

With the mad hatter and Cheshire cat
Drinking tea and Leary grin 
While Alice, waltzed into the tea party and sat
Oblivious to the frustration she would be in

Frivolous riddles and 'why not's?'
Babies  turning into pigs
mismatched saucers and pots
Cards for soldiers,  flamingos for clubs,  As if candy canes make up ships rigs

Her facts never came out right 
Her shape changing from so many sizes
What is wrong, or is she just not very bright?
Madness has many disguises

Alice never fell into wonderland 
Wonderland fell into Alice 
With the feeling of madness-isn't grand?
The air is full of unspoken malice 

Off with her head!
She unknowingly yells at night 
Thrashing and crackling in her bed
Clenching her hands around her victim with all her might 
The queen of hearts, 
Making a blood red path 
Poor knave, accused of stealing the tarts 
Encountering the kings' and queens' wrath

The court is mad
The hatter never did finish his tea 
With a bellowing king, the hatter is sad
This means he will never quite finish his tea, you see?

Constant beheadings,
A story of a lobster dance. 

This kingdom is mad indeed. 


© 2012 Hachamecha


Author's Note

Hachamecha
After the poem I had written was erased, I decided to make a different one.
Don't expect it to make sense. Or even have a steady tempo.

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

I looked at this because I like Lewis Carroll,and have been rewarded with a well written second look at the book.You have taken time and gone to a lot of trouble to write this,and it was worth it.What I like is the way all the details are correct.
Good work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love Alice in Wonderland, and this was a fantastic poem. Considering it IS Alice in Wonderland, it doesn't actually NEED to make sense. XD

Posted 12 Years Ago



Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

121 Views
2 Reviews
Rating
Added on January 8, 2012
Last Updated on January 8, 2012

Author

Hachamecha
Hachamecha

Ledyard, CT



About
I don't write much anymore. I will though. I'll find my muse. She just died along with my will. 39~ -Hachamecha more..

Writing
Idea s Idea s

A Story by Hachamecha


Moving Moving

A Poem by Hachamecha


Obsura Obsura

A Poem by Hachamecha