Dear brother, why did you break Mommy's treasure?

Dear brother, why did you break Mommy's treasure?

A Poem by Hachamecha

See it?

That is mommy's treasure

Yes, brother.

It's delicate.


I wonder?

What would happen to you

if you break it?


(what are you doing?)

I wonder...

what would happen?

Will she smack you?

and love me more?


Please mommy..

Love me more.





You know better then that,

don't you,

Dear brother?



Oh no, brother

you destroyed it.

you destroyed mommy's precious treasure


I wonder what would happen...

If I tried to stop you?

I would be punched...


(Why are you punching yourself?!)

Ow. It hurts, brother.

Why did you hurt me?

Why did you cut me with mommy's treasure?


I wonder...

how much mommy will hate you now?


You see,

dear brother.

She will love me more.

© 2012 Hachamecha

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This when reading has a twisted side that makes you wonder. Nice write.

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Ledyard, CT

I don't write much anymore. I will though. I'll find my muse. She just died along with my will. 39~ -Hachamecha more..

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