Love Most powerful

Love Most powerful

A Poem by Haley M
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simple defining and explanationns of love

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Love can compare to no other feeling or emotion

Love may not be shared between one person, but many

Love may not be felt towards a person but a thing or activity

Love is an intense feeling of deep affection

 

When one feels so strongly, love is the only word that can be described

You don’t know what love is until you have had it

When you miss someone or something so much it hurts, you’re in love.

You never need to go looking for love; It will find you when least expected.

 

How do I know love is real?

I’ve personally gotten to experience it.

Why should you believe me?

You won’t believe until it happens to you, which is inevitable.

 

Everyone fears love at the start

Everyone gets stuck in love at some point

Everyone falls out of love at some point

Everyone gets hurt by love unexpectedly.

 

True love is by one’s own heart minded decisions

Gender nor race nor religion may change a feeling towards another

Discriminate, love does not.

There’s no control over who or what one loves.

 

Love is the ultimate emotion and controls any other feeling one shall undergo

Love is real, love is here, and love is sometimes unfair

Love may not be a connection, but an aspiration.

Love may not be returned but will always be worth the struggle.

 

© 2013 Haley M


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Haley M
I'm just starting so I would love helpful, nice critisism.

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I really enjoyed reading this. Your writing is very mature for someone so young. I'm also new to this site and in high school, maybe we can be poetry pals or something like that lol!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You describe love so well. There is many loves I agree, and sadly the one love I haven't found is true love.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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