I'm Sorry

Wrote this when my boyfriend and I got into a fight.

I'm sorry that I push you away,

I'm sorry that I cause you pain.

I know that deep inside,

I really want to die; goodbye.

I know it seems a bit harsh,

But I want you to know,

That I love you so. . .

Reviews

[Jamie]

Great poem! Really good work :)

[Haley Harrigan]

Thank you!

[Jamie]

You're welcome :) Feel free to review my stuff :)

[Wórdsmíth]

Poor-Heartaches.

[parkerjeslick]

Nice work! Way to put your thoughts down and say how you feel.

[00000000000000000000000..]

This was a very sweet write:)

[Sami Khalil]

I'm sorry that I push you away,

I'm sorry that I cause you pain.

I know that deep inside,

I really want to die; goodbye.

I know it seems a bit harsh,

But I want you to know,

That I love you so. . .



© 2013 Haley Rawrz

[Echoes of Eros]

There is a wild ache when we hurt the one we love. May you both melt your two fires into one wild, burning flame to last forever. xo

[Stevo The POE-t]

I really enjoyed reading this girl... I think every writer on earth can relate to this... Or they can relate to it through their writings.. Cause you know as writers we have the possibility to create life on paper... We can take experiences from our own life or someone else's life... It is truly sad when the woman/man that your in love with can't forgive you for something... It's a shame really... You have to be able to open their eyes in order to see past what you have done... And maybe one day you will get there... Good luck... I can't wait to read more of your work...

[zainul]

This is a great gesture of reconciliation.
Your honest confession is enough to perpetuate a sweet relationship.

[Sami Khalil]

Forgiveness is good...A very good write...:)................

[Haley Harrigan]

Thank you.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)................