I Want To. . .

I Want To. . .

A Poem by Hannah
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A lovers request.

"

I want to disappear

Feel your skin

And fall into ecstasy

 

I want to fall

Into white sheets

That smell like you

 

I want to sigh

From the pleasure

Of your soft touch

 

I want to caress

Your warm body

Until your eyes close

 

I want to dream

Of the love

That we both share

 

I want to sleep

In your arms

And never wake up

© 2010 Hannah


Author's Note

Hannah
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lovely poem! I love that you have kept a 3 word line and some of your quotes are really deep. Good Job!

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on November 7, 2010
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Tags: Lovers, Passion, Calm, Love

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Hannah
Hannah

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