Old Fish Being Prepared for Supper

The Ocean at lowtide

Escaped into my Home

HOW FOUL!

Author's Note

First poem I wrote in a long time. Just typed something in w/o practicing. Feel free to Critique

Reviews

[Ryan K. M.]

Could have many different meanings, especially depending on the writer's vision and reader's interpretation. Almost seems like frustration at a hurricane's wrath on a coastal town. Or, possibly a metaphor.

[goldenscar__]

Oh... I need a pill, my head is spinning.

[Wonderland Asylum]

simple, and wants me to keep reading.
looking forward for more of your work.

[TormentedTales]

Of course I wish it was longer. Please expand on this.