Point-blank

100-word story for fiction writing class (the word limit includes the title). Based off of the McInerney trial.

He retaliated against everything you threw at him. Who knew the torment would lead to this? That sissy took it too far. The humiliation burns deeply, but the punishment will fit the crime.

Class is in session. He sits in front of you. The timing’s right. Aware of the consequences, you reconsider, but only for a moment. You recall his wrongdoings. “Love you, baby!” The laughter echoes. Yesterday’s scab reopens. You’re seeing red. That’s right, put him out of your misery.

Take the stand. Whip out the gun. Bang! Bang! The deed is done. Drop your weapon. Walk away.

Author's Note

RIP Larry King.

This piece is open for any critiques.

Reviews

[David]

I can't imagine trying to write a story using less than 100 words.It's got plenty of powerful emotion,but I'm finding it hard to see a bigger picture.It's chilling enough though.