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CloseMindness

CloseMindness

A Poem by Hawk Flight
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Stupid people

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People Wake the f**k up
its the twenty first century
its 2014 for goddess sake

open your minds
and open your f*****g eyes

This country
the grand old USA
its free is it not?

People can be who they want
and they can certainly love
whoever they f*****g want to love!

If you dont like it
if you dont aprove
KEEP IT TO YOUR F*****G SELF

Don't bring your
bigeted close minded selves
into their lives
they are 100% better off without you

But I will let you in on something

GET WITH THE F*****G PROGRAM!!!!!
GET OVER IT AND MOVE THE F**K ON!!!!!!!

© 2014 Hawk Flight


Author's Note

Hawk Flight
this poem was intended to be about accepting gay, lesbian, BISEXUAL people.

I wrote this after a person (different site) commented on my Twittle poem saying THIS
"I feel peaple who go the gay route sell out for money, views, ex."

close minded bastard

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No offense, but I believe it would help to get your point across if you used the F word less, or maybe change it up a little and use other swear words! Also, I believe in the beginning you meant to say goodness not goddess. Other than that, nice job way to stand up for what you believe in!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hawk Flight

9 Years Ago

Beacause I am Wiccan and I believe in the goddess. SO instead of saying FOR GOD SAKE I say FOR GODDE.. read more
Goat

9 Years Ago

Oh, I understand. I did not know you were Wiccan, sorry.
Hawk Flight

9 Years Ago

its quite alright. How could you have. I didnt tell you prior to this



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I agree Hawk. I am Wiccan and have had to deal with this in the Army. I had to go to the head Chaplin and explain how I was going to celebrate All Hallows Eve. But no one else had to do that for their religious holidays.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Hawk Flight

9 Years Ago

sorry that happened to you. BUt this poem isnt really about religion. its about Gay Rights.
ron

9 Years Ago

Oh ok. I agree with you its no ones business. And if they don't like it they can just keep it to the.. read more
No offense, but I believe it would help to get your point across if you used the F word less, or maybe change it up a little and use other swear words! Also, I believe in the beginning you meant to say goodness not goddess. Other than that, nice job way to stand up for what you believe in!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hawk Flight

9 Years Ago

Beacause I am Wiccan and I believe in the goddess. SO instead of saying FOR GOD SAKE I say FOR GODDE.. read more
Goat

9 Years Ago

Oh, I understand. I did not know you were Wiccan, sorry.
Hawk Flight

9 Years Ago

its quite alright. How could you have. I didnt tell you prior to this

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Added on June 17, 2014
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Hawk Flight
Hawk Flight

Kingdom of Amythest, MA



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