Exactly

Falling
Falling
Falling freely


Screaming
Screaming
Screaming silently


Hearing Hearing
Hearing
Nothing


Seeing
Seeing
Seeing
Darkness

Knowing
Knowing
Knowing
Exactly what caused
this.

Reviews

[The Cuckoo's Nest]

I like this. I think the use of repetition and progressive tense make it very powerful, but why did you change the format of the stanzas? Why not write each stanza as three lines, exactly like you did with the first two?

[WindsorWolf28]

It originally had shape to it, but I put it in the text box, and all the shape just left it.