Forbidden Fruit

Forbidden Fruit

Just one more sip of fine wine

one more taste of forbidden fruit

 one more gamble in the love stakes

then I will give up my addiction

you...

  ~~~

© Helen M Crutchett (All rights reserved) 2007

Reviews

[Wondering Mind]

Once it becomes habit, then we're hopeless...
A beautiful write as always.

[emmajoy]

Briefly laid, lovingly punchy, sharp but kind .. that's addiction in every letter and line.

[Rick Puetter]

Dear Helena,

Very nice. Not easy to give up an addiction. We speak brave words when we have been satisfied, but then the craving starts again, and resolve crumbles. We long for "one more taste of forbidden fruit", "and then I will give up my addiction..." Well maybe until the next time.

Greatly enjoyed.

Best regards,

Rick

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Being in love with the idea of being in love is the greatest blinder of the heart.