The Never Ending War

When will this war end?

 War is like an unbarring sea

You try and try to get there

But you never find what you need

You search of peace prosperity and life

But all you see is the opposite

Darkness from light

Life from death

But is this possible

Your lead swords are to heavy for one to carrie

As you walk across mountains of friends and families

Does war ever solve the one important question

Does war fix the broken home

Does war open up doors

Doors that have never meant to be opened

Let out a Demon

A demon of our minds

That will consume us

Til the end of time

 

Reviews

[Marilu Elizabeth]

wow i like it u did better than i did with the topic of war lol

[bluessadmood]

How I love peace makers,those words of peace,give the one a special lovely character for wars are real ugly thing..
We search for peace in life only to see the opposite,darkness not light,death and not life
You walk with heavy swords across mountains of friends,war will never solve a question
never fix a broken home,never open doors,will let out demons to come out..to consume us
lovely write..