LET ME BE 🦋

This scars runs too deep
Through my soul through my veins
Let’s change shoes for a minute
Then tell me if you could handle this Fuc.... S**t
You think i am wild
You think i am hard to understand
You think i am a hot mess
But what do you know
How can you tell what is inside
When all you can see is through eyes
There is darkness i fight
Past demons i try to battle and hide
So do you think i give a s**t
About what is on your mind
I live for me not for you
But now i choose to live for God not for me or you
So let me live my life
And stop trying to educate me
what you think you know is right
And please stop spreading false rumors about me
Cause you will be judged not by me but by God's eyes


PART TOO

I have been through hell back and forth
I have been burned more than you know
But by Gods grace i am still standing strong and alive
So if you think it matters
You can just eat your rubbish words
And let me be me even if its for a while
You think you have the right to change me and judge
Well judge yourself so you can be purified
Let me do me and you can do you
Its simple as that
This scars are real they tell a story
The demons i battle are scary
I Wouldn't wish it on my worest enemy
So i am good with God's Grace
So i don't need your opinions
On whats wrong and whats right
I will fly my wings once i get this right
I will shine as the sun as the shooting star
Like a butterfly in the sky same as morning Star🦋

Author's Note

Hey Dear Writers I am newbie here i am posting my poems/poetry so i can openly accept your advices critics and opinions on my poems to advance in my writings and to learn !!! i would be happy to hear from you !!! Lots of Love !!!

Reviews

[Tepo]

Another fine write Heli
I can't wait until you are confident enough to tell us about those demons in your writes
You are hinting at more to come methinks
Wouldn't be surprised if you already have some written
If not
You are well on the way

Now
I'm scared to say this bit
Part two it should read
Not trying to educate you like the subject the write
I make a few typos and I'm glad when I can fix it if pointed out
Keep em coming
Butterflies must fly

[Heli Butterfly]

Thank U So Much Dear Tepo .... Ur words are supportive & i am greatful.... Yes its an honour that U are Correcting me so how should i write stop trying to educate me what words should i replace them if you dont mind As You are exprienced ....!!!

[Heli Butterfly]

Ummm who knows Lol some day i might be able to talk about it !!!

[Tepo]

no no
I was not talking of any changes
It reads as it should from the heart
I just hoped you didn't think I was trying the same
Ie to correct or educate
Be confident
Your words are yours
It's what makes them unique
Nothing needs changed

[Heli Butterfly]

Ohhh My Bad Sorry i thought U were Talking about changing or correcting some words on it...Even so I am okay with it if i want to be a good writer i need to be open minded and try to accept more ideas from experienced writers.... And Thanks Again ..... !!!

[Tepo]

you have only posted two
Plenty time to get where you want to be
Like everything else
Thet tell us practice makes perfect
Being yourself is most powerful
Keep it up my friend

[Heli Butterfly]

Okay Dear Tepo i Understand Ur right about that ... And I will Peace 🙏🙏🙏