Given Up

I'm never gonna fill the void
With my heart destroyed
Rip off the bandage
Because nothing can erase the damage

Why bother ? No one cares anymore
Even if they found me dead on the floor
They'd choose to ignore
Like they have before

I welcome my impending demise
My smile is my disguise
My tears confirm the lies
But it's no surprise

Reviews

[Rachelle]

There are those days and there are THOSE days.

Things never do last. Emotions evolve. The wind that knocks you down today might exactly be what you might need to soar tomorrow.

[Hunter Havoc]

Thanks for reading, and while I believe that emotions do evolve I know firsthand that its not always for the better

[Rachelle]

Give yourself a break. Forgive yourself and live life even though it seems terrible. It's all a test of your strength..... Find your magis.

[Rachelle]

This is the story of a boy from my country. This is his magis:
http://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kesz_Váldez

[Hunter Havoc]

It's not that I chose to feel like this. Because I really can't help it, its just how I function. I have friends that are always asking me when I'm gonna write a "happy" poem and my answer is "when my life starts improving" and it's not there yet.

[MyOpenThirdEye]

A very familiar damaged feeling. Its hard to build up your heart and spirit when it feels like nobody cares.
Good emotion, written pretty directly.

[Hunter Havoc]

Thanks, no matter who you are and what you've gone through at some point you'll feel neglected. It's just the way life is unfortunately