I don't know

I don't know

A Poem by Hiru
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My heart is amusing

"
The day I first saw you..
I was really amazed...
You looked so handsome that
I was unable to take off my eyes from you..

My heart beat beacame so fast
and I don't know why..
But I always wanted to look at you..

Even when I'm listening to someone else,
I stared at you..
Even when we were studing,
my eyes were on you..

Later it became a habit...

I always wanted to be with you..
walk with you..
I don't know why
but I fall onto you...
I wanted to hold onto you..

Was it love? I don't know..
Was it only an attraction? I don't know.. 

The day we got separated,
The day we had to leave eachother,
Why did my heart cried a lot??
I don't know that either..

Even though I don't know anything,
Why do I still think it as my 'First Love' ??

© 2017 Hiru


Author's Note

Hiru
we all do love our first love.. that is the purest love of all.. leave a review if you enjoyed this..

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*Welcome to "Pure Rhymes" Thanks for joining, great to have you...!*

We DO all have a first love, and it usually leaves us in the exact spot this poem details out...

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was amazing. I have felt the same emotions so I could connect with it. Simple and Raw. Keep going.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hiru

6 Years Ago

Thank u very much for the encouraging words..!! It means a lot..!

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Added on October 15, 2017
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Hiru
Hiru

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