One Day She'll Realize

One Day She'll Realize

A Poem by hxldxncxxns
"

Dismal.

"
One day she'll wake up and realize
How much I cared for her
I mean, I hope she does
But who knows, she was a crazy b***h
But I loved her
And I thought she loved me.

One day she told me she couldn't be tied down
I didn't know what to say
My entire torso split in two
She didn't seem to care
She just wanted to hook up
She had no feelings for me
I trusted her.

© 2015 hxldxncxxns


Author's Note

hxldxncxxns
Feelings.

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

It happens. We think in one direction and life goes in another. Lesson learned. Te hard way, but learned.

Posted 9 Years Ago


nice structure of the poem. i didn't realize you did poems, but you're probably looking for the emotional piece where i can only sympathise with you on girls. great work. cant wait for the next surprize.

thank you,

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kite kid

9 Years Ago

no way, you should be more optimistic and laugh when the feeling comes, to live a better life. and w.. read more
kite kid

9 Years Ago

nice new pic
hxldxncxxns

9 Years Ago

ha, thanks. I needed something that wasn't directly tied to me but still kinda me....

Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

127 Views
2 Reviews
Rating
Added on January 6, 2015
Last Updated on January 6, 2015

Author

hxldxncxxns
hxldxncxxns

CA



About
Greetings, this is my first time opening my writing to the public. I'm not sure what I'm trying to accomplish here but I hope I'll learn something. Thank you more..

Writing
Alone. Alone.

A Poem by hxldxncxxns



Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..