What Makes me Yours

Escapades of love
exists in my limelight
when I flourish you
in dedication...

Hearts swindle
within their chests
when I claim that
I love you...

A generation of thought
is erased
when you call my name...
It is as if your lips are calling me new
Disarming me for a purpose of your own
Compelling me to surrender

Your touch
Your love
my weakness...

Reviews

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Great passionate write. Sunflower

[Angel's Lady]

It is as if your lips are calling me new
Disarming me for a purpose of your own
Compelling me to surrender --- I love these lines!

Nicely done!

[Johnny Westbrook]

lovely poem. i guess there's someone who makes you melt from the way you wrote that poem. well written and expressed. great read, i enjoyed it. keep it up ;).

[Soul Magic✯]

beautifully expressed. you flow so wonderfully in this piece. i enjoyed it

[Art]

Nicely written poem...your expressions are well versed within this short poetic display...

nice...