It's Not Over

An introduction to who I am as an artist..

Reviews

[V]

It's a nicely written piece, introduction to who you are, as you stated in your description. I like your choice of words. If I may make a remark to your profile description: You state no negativity allowed. What about constructive criticism such as pointing out negative things in your writings?Everyone has a different perception and interpretation of writings/art in general and this should be respected.

[Elizabeth J. Gelinger]

I liked the images created by the choices of words. The rhythm breaks at some points, but it doesn't make it any less good. Really enjoyed it.

[DreamsFloat]

why thank you!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

I like it....Neat write, but guessing from your other poem ...You could do better. It's not bad either way. Full rating :)

[DreamsFloat]

thank you very much

[Nisreen]

I admire your style
you have this quality of slowly delivering a message
Its got a lot of solace

Thumps up !!!

[DreamsFloat]

thanks again i appreciate that!

[Jeff]

Very good introduction to your work. I'll have to check out more of your work.

[DreamsFloat]

i appreciate that

[tscade17]

Wow the most poetic poem i have ever read

[DreamsFloat]

thank you!

[Archia]

A great way to serve as an introduction. I think this poem shows that there's going to be depth of rawness to your writing which I imagine will create some great work like this one.

[DreamsFloat]

thank you that means a lot

[richieb]

The raw truth may be the key you are looking for. Nice write I enjoyed it.
Richie.

[DreamsFloat]

thanks we can only hope so

[Robert Parlange]

There are many ways out of that box. You can bash your head against the walls until you lose consciousness or you can find one of those many keys you mentioned. Unfortunately, those keys are sometimes well hidden.

Occasionally there are smug and negative people on this site. Rise above all that. Negativity tends to hug the bottom.

[Elmarie]

Hi DF

Some deep thoughts there. "Lust for nothing - but raw truth" It's very nice. We should all live by that. I liked your creative layout of the work. Blessings El

[DreamsFloat]

I appreciate that!

[Soulcatchers]

Nicely done.