Doorways & Windows

Knock, Knock.

"Who's there" my dream and destiny arrives,

come to lead me down pathways of my infinitely possible lives.

Halting, just a second, all three of us planted to the floor.

In studious observance of one window & two doors.

One is hallmarked "dreams" the more enticing door,

sleek finish, flashy paintjob, it holds overall grandeur.

The second of the two is labelled "Destiny" straight across.

Oaken solid slab, a sturdy, steady bore.

We all begin to converse, Dreams, Destiny & I.

For we wish to stay Unbroken, strong & unified.

instead of working as three ideologies. We bond

To form one working mind and body.

we begin to set our aims up high,

now bonded in a collective tie.

Dreams and destiny connect like a never-ending ladder.

As we clamber through the Picturesque window. Together.

Author's Note

Another lighter poem. This one is using the theme of aspirations.

Reviews

[ANTO]

I enjoyed the premise of this one Niall. Personifying the two and yet they remained ethereal. The writing is clever and the story well told - some beauts in the rhyming too.
I would stop to read this before I'd go past it my friend so thats fair - eh?

[Niall Madden]

thank you, I appreciated the feedback and im glad you liked it and yes that is fair :)

[Jerome F Knox III pseud..]

Phenomenal.... Brobdingnagian in nature...flawlessness at best....do you here snapping in the poetry club on this.

[Niall Madden]

thank you you for the review, glad you enjoyed it.

[Mr_M]

Excellent poem, a really intelligent piece.

[Niall Madden]

Thank you appreciate the kind words.

[MomzillaNC]

Congratulations on your placing in the Deep Down Poetry contest.

Well penned commentary on everyone's journey to answer the call of destiny while fulfilling our dreams, and remaining true to our souls.

[Niall Madden]

Thank you. I was really surprised I actually placed at all, and thank you for the review.

[MomzillaNC]

You're welcome. I was surprised when mine placed, as well.

[RomaJ]

Very well conveyed and vivid in imagery. I enjoyed this very much.

[Andrew Dane Parker]

Yet another great one. You are very descriptive and know exactly how to write how you feel. Its very good!

[Niall Madden]

Thank you for the kind words :)

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

Wow. You are a very intelligent poet, I have never seen a poem as unique as this one. I loved it, I can't wait to read and review more!

[Niall Madden]

im glad you enjoyed it , I appreciate the review as well.

[Eagergreen]

I just finished a chemistry essay on bonding the coincidence is weird. I liked the poem to me it was escaping predestiny and going to make your own instead of clambering through the trail many of us walk the speaker decided to blaze a new one

[Sami Khalil]

"now bonded in a collective tie.
Dreams and destiny connect like a never-ending ladder.
As we clamber through the Picturesque window. Together."

A splendid read and write... Bravo...........

[Niall Madden]

im glad you enjoyed.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)........