Love Kills All

A very short story ( I dont like to type )

She had always loved him

but she couldnt show him how she felt.

He was too cool for her so

she cut herself to get rid of her feelings

but her fire for him still burned.

She wanted him...she yearned for him.

One day he finds a note in his locker.

It says,

Justin I've always loved you . I know you feel the same way about me. I want to be together.

If you love me, come to my house today after school

          Love,

              Maddie

 After school, he went to her house and knocked on her door.

When she answered the door she felt like she could jump on him right now.

He reached into his pocket, and pulled out a note.

She could hardly restrain pulling him to her as she took the note from his hands.

All it said was,

   Im so sorry

her facical expresion was unexplainable.

He had just killed her inside.

He got into his car and left her standing in the door crying. Bleeding mascara

She was broken... she was alone...

So she found the sharpest knife she had.

Realizing he made a huge mistake, he rushed back to her house. 

He pounded on the door for what seemed like an eternaty.But no one was home.

He went inside only to see her sliting her wrists and her throut.

He stared horrorfied at her and what she was doing.

She stared back with her lifeless eyes covered in blood.

''I love you'' was all she could say before she fell to the floor.

He raced to her holding her body.

He called for help but it was too late.

She was gone... suicide.

And it was his fault.

Unable to live with himself ,

he jumped from his 15th floor apartment.

But now ... they rot in hell forever.

The End

Reviews

[Heath Payton]

I like any poems about love and relationships.
You have got a great talent for words.
Keep writing this bold emotion, it is appreciated.

[Alaina]

wow, well hmm that kinda reminds me of how i felt when i was writing my poem: Because of you.. i felt like an insane, crazy, pysco b***h, who wanted to kill herself then him.. Wow its very deep,, and for being a "short: story it gets the point across rather well. Wow im in shock after reading that it kinda brings back all theae messed up memories. Its a great story though because im sure plenty of girls can relate to it rather well rather its dieing in a figurative or literal sense lets hpe its mostly figurative, but even that can kill,, youd probably rather be dead then suffer the pain of a broken heart. Amazing piece id love to see more of this intense , deep, powerful writing.
Thanx for sharing!